Mesh Heart
Mesh Heart
Mesh Heart

opinion on this one?
Stare into my eyes
As i run my fingertips across your skin
Feeling every inch and letting your eyes stare in
Your eyes
They search my mind
They flow through my heart
They trace my outline
They bring me into you
Tell me you love me
Before i kiss your lips
Letting it go on forever holding me in
Your words
They make me listen
They pierce my heart
They engulf me from within
They pull me to you
Hold me close
As i wrap my arms around you
Feeling your warmth and allowing the sin
Your arms
They protect me
They keep me warm
They wont let me go
They keep me with you
Kiss me softly
As the sin goes on
As our hearts melt and mesh within
The Sin
So amazing
So close
Not a sin at all
But what we want
Nice. There is just one part of a line that seems awkward to me. It is the second half of the third line, "and letting your eyes stare in." There is just something about that line that doesn't really fit.
Tiffany & Co Inspired 0.925 Sterling Silver Mesh Heart Ring